Monday, September 25, 2006

Un-Model Essays 2006: Formal Letter

You are an an quan tao pi fa shang. Write a formal letter to the school headmistress informing the headmistress of your company's services.

 Holess AQT
 9 Jln SP,
56400 Kuala Lumpur. ________________________________________________________________________________

The Headmistress
Kuen Cheng Co-Ed High School
5 Jln SP, 56400 Kuala Lumpur                                                                  
                                                                                                         25 SEPTEMBER 2006

 Dear Madam,

 Re: Services To Provide AQT In Your School


In accordance with your plan to convert your all-girls school into a co-ed school, my company is pleased to offer our services to provide aqt in your school.

2. We are able to provide your school with aqt dispensers in all male and female toilets, including staff toilets if so required. Besides that, we can also provide you with educational leaflets for distribution, detailing the use of aqt and the risks involved.

3. We are able to come every month, or whenever necessary, to refill the dispensers at no extra cost. We can also provide, upon request, loose boxes of aqt that can be sold at the canteen or the bookshop or any other place that is deemed necessary.

4. As we are all aware, teenagers have very enquiring minds. In order to prevent unwanted accidents or communicable diseases, we recommend the use of our services, which can be obtained for a reasonable price of RMXXX per month.

5. A special promotion is ongoing, where if you sign up for our services, we will sponsor a talk on sex education in your school free of charge. In addition, we have a 12+1 deal where you will get one month service free if you sign up for twelve months. These offers are only available if you sign up before 15 October 2006.

Thank you.



"Make the right choice!"

Yours sincerely,

The Owner


(This letter is computer-generated and needs no signature)